From Showing our rough cut video to our Media Studies class, we have managed to gain a lot of useful feedback both positive and negative from the people who have watched it for the first time.
The first point that was addressed to us was the fact that towards the end of the music video, the narrative starts to fall a little bit and it's only just clips of Lauren dancing. We will therefore be able to overcome this by going out to a different location and film some extra couple shots of Alice and Jack.
Secondly, it was brought to Lola and I's attention that some the shots of Lauren dancing the performance shots in the pit, really look like it is being filmed in the pit. This is because when trying to film with her movement we have managed to get the floor in the shot, which makes it look a little bit out of place. In order for us to overcome this piece of feedback, we are going to mask out the bits that look like we are filming in the pit. This will take a little bit of time however, it will be worth the outcome. Some more feedback that we were given was that the editing could be edited to the beat a little bit more than it was. In mine and Lola's defence, we have tried our absolute best to get the editing of this rough cut to the best that it can possibly be at this stage. The editing will therefore be changed for the beginning chorus since that is where we are falling with the way in which the editing is done at the beginning of the music video. We both think that the chorus needs to be much faster than it is at the moment, so we will therefore change it in order to make it look its best and as professional as possible.
The first point that was addressed to us was the fact that towards the end of the music video, the narrative starts to fall a little bit and it's only just clips of Lauren dancing. We will therefore be able to overcome this by going out to a different location and film some extra couple shots of Alice and Jack.
Secondly, it was brought to Lola and I's attention that some the shots of Lauren dancing the performance shots in the pit, really look like it is being filmed in the pit. This is because when trying to film with her movement we have managed to get the floor in the shot, which makes it look a little bit out of place. In order for us to overcome this piece of feedback, we are going to mask out the bits that look like we are filming in the pit. This will take a little bit of time however, it will be worth the outcome. Some more feedback that we were given was that the editing could be edited to the beat a little bit more than it was. In mine and Lola's defence, we have tried our absolute best to get the editing of this rough cut to the best that it can possibly be at this stage. The editing will therefore be changed for the beginning chorus since that is where we are falling with the way in which the editing is done at the beginning of the music video. We both think that the chorus needs to be much faster than it is at the moment, so we will therefore change it in order to make it look its best and as professional as possible.
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